- In the thesis statement, there's a lot of talk about the mirror stage. Move this to another page and separate it. Bullet point the points.
- Update the storyboard.
- Fix the "professional references" to "books/journals"
- Move the 2d/3d side by side to to logline instead.
- Fix the audio from the end of the 2nd flash.
- Girl's voice seems late, the did you hear that.
- Turn the voices down a bit.