Thesis Daily 16

Current Animatic:

Presentation Comments

  1. In the thesis statement, there's a lot of talk about the mirror stage. Move this to another page and separate it. Bullet point the points.
  2. Update the storyboard.
  3. Fix the "professional references" to "books/journals"
  4. Move the 2d/3d side by side to to logline instead.

Animatic Comments

  1. Fix the audio from the end of the 2nd flash.

Demo Comments

  1. Girl's voice seems late, the did you hear that.
  2. Turn the voices down a bit.